I like the use of the texture in the background - nice touch, but I'm not really liking the "crease" across each of the slides.
Of the two submissions, I prefer the green "rays" on the top/bottom rather than left/right sides.
I'd really like to see the "lacy" hemming in each slide like at the bottom of my header on my website and would also like to see both blues and red/oranges incorporated into each slide.
Ideally, I'd like the "girl" silhouette included on each slide as well. I'm not worried about having space for info - I'd rather the slides be eye-catching instead.
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Of the two submissions, I prefer the green "rays" on the top/bottom rather than left/right sides.
I'd really like to see the "lacy" hemming in each slide like at the bottom of my header on my website and would also like to see both blues and red/oranges incorporated into each slide.
Ideally, I'd like the "girl" silhouette included on each slide as well. I'm not worried about having space for info - I'd rather the slides be eye-catching instead.
5-Sep-08, 6:52pm GMT
Disclosure: I created all the stuff in my entry all by myself. (?)
This entry has a little more texture overall to the background and carried over the typefaces used on the postcard.Shown here is the main splash page, title page, blank page, and bulleted list page.
5-Sep-08, 6:42pm GMT