- font: love the font!!! small exception: the first "L" in the le swap logo is too ornate. The 'S' in swap should be closer to the 'wap', i.e. kerned. "Search" and "Main Content" are beautiful and good sizes too. hats off!
- colors: OK, but this is a functional website, i.e. needs a bit more contrast for readability. "advanced search" is completely lost, for example. The "angled siding" in the rightnav is going to be tough. You might try making the "roman siding" just a bit narrower i.e. less distracting
- logo: the logo is just a bit bigger than I'd like i.e. distracting from the main content.
overall, this isn't the original theme I was thinking-- it's more gothic than "french garden"-- but I really like it!!! please continue the theme!
Disclosure: Some of the stuff in my entry was created by someone else but I have the rights to both use it and resell it. (?)
This entry is optimized for 1024×768 resolution. It may look graphic heavy, but many of the elements are patterns. The column isn't currently, but I could make it one. Even the wood panels on the right are a pattern, albeit a large one. Please let me know, in specific terms, what you would like me to change, and I will quickly work on it! I am determined to win this. Thanks for your feedback, in advance.
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- colors: OK, but this is a functional website, i.e. needs a bit more contrast for readability. "advanced search" is completely lost, for example. The "angled siding" in the rightnav is going to be tough. You might try making the "roman siding" just a bit narrower i.e. less distracting
- logo: the logo is just a bit bigger than I'd like i.e. distracting from the main content.
overall, this isn't the original theme I was thinking-- it's more gothic than "french garden"-- but I really like it!!! please continue the theme!
cheers!
adam
2-Sep-08, 4:14am GMT
Disclosure: Some of the stuff in my entry was created by someone else but I have the rights to both use it and resell it. (?)
This entry is optimized for 1024×768 resolution. It may look graphic heavy, but many of the elements are patterns. The column isn't currently, but I could make it one. Even the wood panels on the right are a pattern, albeit a large one. Please let me know, in specific terms, what you would like me to change, and I will quickly work on it! I am determined to win this. Thanks for your feedback, in advance.2-Sep-08, 3:05am GMT