ah this is getting much closer!
- thank you for adding the example text + graphics. Much easier to see how it reads + balance.
- the "latest news" is adorable!! the text ishard to read on it, but that's easy to fix.
- the extra bouquet at the top is pretty! In smaller-sized screens, I can resize or remove this element.
- one substantial problem: the logo is not cute and hard to read. Please try another--
This overall design is acceptable: fix the logo and deliver the mechanical changes below, and unless two "better" designs are submitted, you'll get one of the awards. Kudos!
the mechanical things to prep this for delivery:
- the pink-gray border-background: I'd like a full-sized graphic delivered for this, so I can show more of this graphic on large screens.
- I need the HTML form elements (SELECT-pulldowns, radio buttons, checkboxes, etc.) designed as well. Please add them to the center content area so I can see what a stylized form will look like.
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- thank you for adding the example text + graphics. Much easier to see how it reads + balance.
- the "latest news" is adorable!! the text ishard to read on it, but that's easy to fix.
- the extra bouquet at the top is pretty! In smaller-sized screens, I can resize or remove this element.
- one substantial problem: the logo is not cute and hard to read. Please try another--
This overall design is acceptable: fix the logo and deliver the mechanical changes below, and unless two "better" designs are submitted, you'll get one of the awards. Kudos!
the mechanical things to prep this for delivery:
- the pink-gray border-background: I'd like a full-sized graphic delivered for this, so I can show more of this graphic on large screens.
- I need the HTML form elements (SELECT-pulldowns, radio buttons, checkboxes, etc.) designed as well. Please add them to the center content area so I can see what a stylized form will look like.
cheers!
adam
29-Aug-08, 2:13pm GMT
Disclosure: Some of the stuff in my entry was created by someone else and if the buyer picks it, they'll have to buy the rights. (?)
thanks for feedback- tried something else
29-Aug-08, 12:52am GMT